The ending is cute but I was so uncomfortable with their relationship at the beginning. I ...

aerslevdi December 7, 2023 11:31 pm

The ending is cute but I was so uncomfortable with their relationship at the beginning. I have found that is difficult for authors to make you suspend your beliefs and accept something that you wouldn't in real life and this is one of those instances where it wasn't possible for me so I was uncomfortable with the blackmail and while I liked the ending, I wasn't as exciting as it could have been if the beginning had been handled differently.

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