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Nameless December 7, 2023 1:12 am

all this is cute but.. he's not clearing up the misunderstanding.. all he gotta say is "no matter if you then out to be a beta, omega, or alpha NY feelings for you won't change" LIKE JUST SAY IT. PLEASE

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    iamb December 7, 2023 2:32 am

    then there wouldn't be this story..:/ Too bad someone can't figure out a way to have even the same obstacle, but do it without so much time to clear up the misunderstanding. It just leaves us annoyed . ok, me.. leaves me annoyed:)

    Nameless December 7, 2023 4:04 am
    then there wouldn't be this story..:/ Too bad someone can't figure out a way to have even the same obstacle, but do it without so much time to clear up the misunderstanding. It just leaves us annoyed . ok, me..... iamb

    They don't have to break up over a misunderstanding though, it could be that the mc condition is worsening, or he has to move to recive better treatment.. there are multiple routs you can take where they split up and meet again in the future many things that would be better over a simple misunderstanding

    iamb December 7, 2023 4:30 am
    They don't have to break up over a misunderstanding though, it could be that the mc condition is worsening, or he has to move to recive better treatment.. there are multiple routs you can take where they split ... Nameless

    oh, I agree.. I always come up with scenario's for alternate obstacles. haha.. But I was just addressing the 'misunderstanding' one.. I mean, if they want to do that story, then write it in a way that one character never says the simple words that would stop the big break up.. I get the need for the angst plot device, just be more clever about it.