don't hate me y'all

Doo December 6, 2023 10:30 pm

I'm sorry everyone but when I read it my first thought is that the author learned about sex by reading smut without having any IRL experience every dialogue is so cliché and doesn't go with the character's personality (she's a fox and she already had five tails before doing it with him, she's definitely very experienced yet she acted like she never had sex before but maybe goblin guy acquired groundbreaking cumming techniques during his long life confined on an isolated mountain).
Also, can we talk about how fast he fell in love? I understand for Yeon (fox girl) bc she's young and hasn't experienced anything deeper emotionally than sex but him? he literally watched her cry and badum badum when watching hot women cry is a hobby of his??? there is no explanation as to why she's different

Responses
    AichiS. December 7, 2023 9:49 am

    I mean to be fair on the sex thing she did mentioned humans fuckin sucked compared to him and that they were super small. You don't have to be experienced for a finger.

    Doo December 7, 2023 10:31 am
    I mean to be fair on the sex thing she did mentioned humans fuckin sucked compared to him and that they were super small. You don't have to be experienced for a finger. AichiS.

    true but they sucked compared to him. his dick goes above her belly button and he's an immortal, doing worse than him is practically expected for being who only live up to a 100yo

    AichiS. December 7, 2023 4:19 pm

    Ik that's what I just said