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i am also a fan of slowburn but i think there's a difference between slowburn and making your character fall for someone physically and phycologycally abusive....idk. there are ways to make a story slowburn but this isn't it (in my opinion) bj alex also started by jiwon being abusive to dg

I wasn't necessarily talking about Dan, and I get that, writing in concerns to his character is somewhat weak, but I moreso meant the development of Jaekyung in this story. I totally get the criticism though and your opinion is 100% valid. Hell, this is my own opinion too, which your free to challenge in the way you did! ^w^

oh, i totally thought you meant dan lol. but yeah overall i think i understand your point and think similarly too. i hope you didn't feel bad about the way i said it!! i notice know i sounded kinda rude but i meant it as a lighthearted comment :') also i feel that dan's character is a bit weak both as a character and in writing. some of his actions and thoughts feel nonsensical to me? maybe it's bcs i can't share his perspective (obviously) but it feels to me that the author is just doing whatever to make dan fall for jaekyung???

Oh no, for sure, I never read your comment as rude, or at least, it didn't come off that way for me. And like I said, I totally get the criticism of Dan and also think his writing is rather weak. I loved your comment because of how respectful it actually was! That's not super common in these replies. Somewhat, but not really, and I like when people are just respectful in general.

thank you!! you were also really polite and nice :) let's hope things get better for dan's story in the next chapters. it's great to see someone like you here. i hope you have a nice week!