The ML is a total psycho, if the FL wasn't all lovey dovey or how you call it, the ML would've LOCKED HER UP HE LITERALLY SAID MULTIPLE TIMES THAT SHE'S A BIRD LOCKED IN A CAGE, EVEN THE STORY ABOUT SITARA ONLY SHOWS THAT THEY'RE SELF-CONSCIOUS ABOUT THIS. HE ALSO SAID THAT IT'S OBSESSION THERE. Honestly can't say if what he felt was love or just obsession, I feel like it's more likely the latter(I'm scared of the ML to be honest, he giving me the creeps)
And even the FL is not normal, cuz even tho she's from earth, she didn't bat an eye at the fact that the ML is a murderer, same with Phan, she just praised them when someone killed again. I mean, cmon
And the way the story progresses honestly doesn't feel realistic enough, if I may. The ML didn't like the one with purple hair who pursued him for a longer period of time, but for some reason he started to feel infatuated with the FL after some half assed excuse to marry him and after seeing how frail she was. It literally only took a week
Dude, how come you were so angry with the rumors, when those were absolutely true about the og? The battlefield blocked you from knowing basic people from other balls? You really didn't see her all this time other than when she came to ask your hand in marriage?
Also, necrophilia. The body is dead, but the FL doesn't bat an eye at the fact that it's not her actual body, the ML knows this too and both of them only feel the love(obsession) in the air and not the smell of putrefaction(I find it weird that even though he says he loved her, after finding the fact that it's another person in there when it was only half of the story told, he didn't ask for basic stuff like HER NAME and kept the question for the end)
The comments below only praise this story, but I'd give it a 2/5
Bro I didn't think of that, why didn't he ask her actual name as soon as he found out. The whole story makes it sound like there's no other empathetic and kind people out there except for her. I don't even think any of the women other than the fl pass the bechdel test
The ML is a total psycho, if the FL wasn't all lovey dovey or how you call it, the ML would've LOCKED HER UP HE LITERALLY SAID MULTIPLE TIMES THAT SHE'S A BIRD LOCKED IN A CAGE, EVEN THE STORY ABOUT SITARA ONLY SHOWS THAT THEY'RE SELF-CONSCIOUS ABOUT THIS. HE ALSO SAID THAT IT'S OBSESSION THERE. Honestly can't say if what he felt was love or just obsession, I feel like it's more likely the latter(I'm scared of the ML to be honest, he giving me the creeps)
And even the FL is not normal, cuz even tho she's from earth, she didn't bat an eye at the fact that the ML is a murderer, same with Phan, she just praised them when someone killed again. I mean, cmon
And the way the story progresses honestly doesn't feel realistic enough, if I may. The ML didn't like the one with purple hair who pursued him for a longer period of time, but for some reason he started to feel infatuated with the FL after some half assed excuse to marry him and after seeing how frail she was. It literally only took a week
Dude, how come you were so angry with the rumors, when those were absolutely true about the og? The battlefield blocked you from knowing basic people from other balls? You really didn't see her all this time other than when she came to ask your hand in marriage?
Also, necrophilia. The body is dead, but the FL doesn't bat an eye at the fact that it's not her actual body, the ML knows this too and both of them only feel the love(obsession) in the air and not the smell of putrefaction(I find it weird that even though he says he loved her, after finding the fact that it's another person in there when it was only half of the story told, he didn't ask for basic stuff like HER NAME and kept the question for the end)
The comments below only praise this story, but I'd give it a 2/5