Love the art but story is eh (Rereading)

Mellow December 1, 2023 12:20 pm

I wish the story was more focused on their relationship and how they are doing as couple and romance in general because it wasn’t plot heavy at all (even with all the time skips) and it wasn’t romance or character heavy either which made no sense to me.

Up until chapter 39 everything was smooth sailing and the story and their chemistry overall was amazing the story was focused on them we were getting little scenes it was so cute

then after the 5 year time-skip they got together wayyy too fast and I don’t see the same energy and lackluster romance unfortunately…

we don’t really see them doing couple things and the story relies a lot on the other characters. I wish there was an actual proposal scene and they were more focused on their relationship rather than the external factors that affect their relationship (family friends society etc)

Also Im kind of mad Xu Ze just ended up becoming a gym teacher instead of an athlete or something because I was really expecting to be much more successful especially since he was so good.

Also the 2nd time skip just made me really sad.

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