Honestly… this story could’ve been better without the kids, the kids weren’t even necessary. They could)be had a dad who bought movie tickets but his wife and him are kind of estranged although they live together. The only think keeping them together is the kid and the dad bought the tickets in hopes of bonding and keeping the family more together. The day of the movie, both the wife and child is sick and she says to go by himself she didn’t want to go anyways so he goes and refunds two tickets and takes his seat movingly. There is another dad next to him, maybe he lives with his parents and is a single dad but he went out for “alone time” and then it”s where it left off and he’s messing around with himself or some bullshit porn scene. Heck maybe the parents could even be in an open relationship idfk whatever is better than what this was LOL as a kid being alone in a theater, even next to another kid, is scary.
IDK MAN I JUST THINK ADDING THE KIDS WAS SO NECESSARY, it could’ve just been one or two extra pages of quick info and some rearranging and boom easy backstory and reason why he’d cheat.
Honestly… this story could’ve been better without the kids, the kids weren’t even necessary. They could)be had a dad who bought movie tickets but his wife and him are kind of estranged although they live together. The only think keeping them together is the kid and the dad bought the tickets in hopes of bonding and keeping the family more together. The day of the movie, both the wife and child is sick and she says to go by himself she didn’t want to go anyways so he goes and refunds two tickets and takes his seat movingly. There is another dad next to him, maybe he lives with his parents and is a single dad but he went out for “alone time” and then it”s where it left off and he’s messing around with himself or some bullshit porn scene. Heck maybe the parents could even be in an open relationship idfk whatever is better than what this was LOL as a kid being alone in a theater, even next to another kid, is scary.
IDK MAN I JUST THINK ADDING THE KIDS WAS SO NECESSARY, it could’ve just been one or two extra pages of quick info and some rearranging and boom easy backstory and reason why he’d cheat.