the author need to learn how to write better

BobiTheBest November 28, 2023 1:35 am

Yohan is useless he can't protect Victor!Like he just let go of Theon who tortured Victor and even said where his dead dad was!And f*cking Theon was working for Peter but have the nerve to judge Victor for having blood on his hands!

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    im not creative for nicknames December 2, 2023 6:28 am

    I mean, Theon was kinda desperate to be a citizen (both for himself and his dad), not saying working for Peter was the right thing to do, but I can see why someone would put up with it (theon clearly didn't like it) if it meant having a WAYYY better life and being able to protect his dad better (kinda bit him in the end tho lol)

    And I don't think theon was judging Victor for having blood on his hands, it was more of "Ik when u kill ppl, other can't even recognize them coz of how badly u mess them up, and my dad was in that state THEREFORE u killed (and tortured) my dad and I hate u for that" which I mean, hating someone for murdering ur only family is kinda valid

    Also why is it cool that Victor got to mess up ppl and we're like "he was just in a silly goofy mood" but when others do it, it's not cool? MCs shouldnt get a hall pass for doing bad things

    BUTTTTT these are just my thoughts haha, kinda went on a tangent and it's honestly not that deep, u have ur opinions and I have mine and urs are totally understandable and valid as well!!!!!

    Ahjuicy'smile can cure Leprosy December 2, 2023 7:50 am

    I'm not trying to be rude but criticizing the author is a bit too much. If everyone is the same in every story then what's the point of having different stories. If you do not like the story or the characters in the story you can stop reading it anytime.

    I really I am sorry this come off as rude...

    BobiTheBest December 2, 2023 11:52 am
    I'm not trying to be rude but criticizing the author is a bit too much. If everyone is the same in every story then what's the point of having different stories. If you do not like the story or the characters i... Ahjuicy'smile can cure Leprosy

    im sorry if i come off as rude too just trying to say that they need to make me sympathize with him more if they have plan to keep him in the story,like i care for Viktor more so him torturen him and getting away with it doesnt work for me.

    Ahjuicy'smile can cure Leprosy December 2, 2023 3:00 pm
    im sorry if i come off as rude too just trying to say that they need to make me sympathize with him more if they have plan to keep him in the story,like i care for Viktor more so him torturen him and getting aw... BobiTheBest

    Mhm.... Hehe....

    Sugakookie December 4, 2023 7:07 pm
    I mean, Theon was kinda desperate to be a citizen (both for himself and his dad), not saying working for Peter was the right thing to do, but I can see why someone would put up with it (theon clearly didn't lik... im not creative for nicknames

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