Story pacing

Cups November 23, 2023 6:17 am

I just spent the last few days rereading this whole manga non-stop from the start, right from the chapters in challengers, and I can definitely say the pacing feels right. Seriously, if you guys want to complain so much because it has been years, you are just forgetting the rest of the story, I bet you don't remember half of what's happened. it has only been a couple years for the characters, even though its been like 20 for us. Try reading from the start and get some better perspective, please

Responses
    Claudia Silva December 3, 2023 10:30 am

    People are allowed to express their own opinions lol deal with it.

    Cups December 3, 2023 3:55 pm
    People are allowed to express their own opinions lol deal with it. Claudia Silva

    Lmaoo stfu and take your own advice sweaty

    Claudia Silva December 3, 2023 4:18 pm
    Lmaoo stfu and take your own advice sweaty Cups

    Calm the fxck down lol

    Claudia Silva December 3, 2023 4:19 pm
    Lmaoo stfu and take your own advice sweaty Cups

    Why are you so mad,idiot? Lol

    Claudia Silva December 3, 2023 4:25 pm
    Lmaoo stfu and take your own advice sweaty Cups

    I already do that, "sweety". This story isn't perfect at all so I don't understand why you think it is.

    Cups December 8, 2023 2:04 pm
    I already do that, "sweety". This story isn't perfect at all so I don't understand why you think it is. Claudia Silva

    I don't think it's perfect?? Where did I say that?? Also you're the one who's mad babe, calm down you'll live longer

    rambo December 11, 2023 10:26 am

    well.. that's the thing. this is a fiction. not real life. 15 volumes over 10+ years for that little of development is a poor pacing for a story.

    Cups December 11, 2023 10:52 am
    well.. that's the thing. this is a fiction. not real life. 15 volumes over 10+ years for that little of development is a poor pacing for a story. rambo

    Its long form slow burn, if you read it all in one go it feels pretty fine, yeah maybe some things could have been cut and the chapters should come out a lot faster than they are, but that's just unfortunate fact that the chapters come out 1 every few months, all I am saying is that if the people complaining want something fast paced then they should go read something else and stop complaining about this 1 manga, like, like it or not, it won't change

    rambo December 12, 2023 6:18 am
    Its long form slow burn, if you read it all in one go it feels pretty fine, yeah maybe some things could have been cut and the chapters should come out a lot faster than they are, but that's just unfortunate fa... Cups

    actually no. if i want to be more accurate it has been going on for almost 20 years. it started at 2004. the pacing IS a problem. it's not a slow burn anymore, it's not burning at all. and anyone who read it/follow it has the right to complain about it. as an author, you have to make the story engaging for the readers. almost 20 years of publishing for that little of development is not engaging at all. i do want to say that complaining here in this website will not change anything. but complaining on an official website/to the author may change something.

    Blaubeerchen27 January 14, 2024 9:21 am

    Ah yes, the classic "my opinion is right, so go away with yours" on a public website - maybe you should take your own advice and step away from comment sections, if your replies mostly consist of cringe emojis and passive-agressive admonishments.

    Cups January 14, 2024 12:34 pm
    Ah yes, the classic "my opinion is right, so go away with yours" on a public website - maybe you should take your own advice and step away from comment sections, if your replies mostly consist of cringe emojis ... Blaubeerchen27

    Stfu idiot

    Blaubeerchen27 January 14, 2024 5:22 pm
    Stfu idiot Cups

    Exactly the mature and thoughtful response I expected.

    rambo January 15, 2024 7:08 am
    Exactly the mature and thoughtful response I expected. Blaubeerchen27

    lmaoo