Opinion

Whatev_r8 November 22, 2023 8:16 am

IMO, the whole "prove my innocence" thing is so rushed. She claimed to be amnesia but the deduction thing she did is contradicting that statement ( ̄∇ ̄"). Nvm.

Regardless, I like the FL so far. Hope it gets better! Bookmark for now.

Responses
    rain November 22, 2023 5:28 pm

    It definitely was rushed but somehow I think it made the plot a little easier to digest yk? Instead of the proving the innocence part being super predictable and super long

    Whatev_r8 November 23, 2023 10:39 am
    It definitely was rushed but somehow I think it made the plot a little easier to digest yk? Instead of the proving the innocence part being super predictable and super long rain

    That's true but it would be better if author choose lighter filler for that. With this kind of FL, the proving thing can come out to be an awesome arc with the right execution.

    But then again, that's just what if's sooo let's wait and hope this would be an awesome ride! Many of my favs has ended so my awaiting list kinda empty (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

    rain November 24, 2023 3:06 am
    That's true but it would be better if author choose lighter filler for that. With this kind of FL, the proving thing can come out to be an awesome arc with the right execution.But then again, that's just what i... Whatev_r8

    That’s true! Hopefully the storyline is good