All of these chapters should have been dedicated to fully fleshing out the first couple. T...

LeatherKitten November 19, 2023 11:48 pm

All of these chapters should have been dedicated to fully fleshing out the first couple. The extra stories weren’t needed, and just caused the first to feel super rushed. Really wanted to see further growth, especially from Tasaki. He claims to not be prejudiced, but has quite a bit of homophobia and assuming behavior that needs to be ironed out. I also think that the story would have worked a lot better if HE had of been the one who fell in love first, rather than the gay man, that way it would have further dispelled the stereotype that gay men just automatically fall in love with any male they live with.

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