I didn't enjoy this chapter either, which is a shame because I enjoyed the first chapter. I don't understand either the seme or the uke. For example, why the fuck does the uke just let some guy PULL HIS DICK OUT COMPLETELY in public without putting up any sort of a fight? Is it just me that thinks that's pathetic? How am I going to respect a character that lets himself get molested and even gets turned on? Furthermore, why does the seme just let his uke get molested? I mean, I get that he is a bit twisted and sadistic, and I think his personality adds to the story... but really? Like, didn't you say you loved him? Weren't you super possessive? Why the hell are you just watching? For fucks sake, can't the author make her characters coherent? Sorry for rambling, but I just get super pissed when a story and the characters don't make sense at all. Again, I understand this is just a story and maybe I need to chill, but this is just too much.
lol, yep, yep :) Plenty of people have the watching your lover with another, or public kink, and that's awesome (again as long as it's good for all involved). I think I have been reading Yaoi with a realistic tone in them lately, so this put me off a bit. Heavens know why I am looking for realism in a Yaoi *fantasy* of all things (⊙…⊙ ) lol, I know it's just a story. it's just that Yuuji seemed pushed in everything (sigh). BUT, I am curious about how ghost boy became ghost boy...
Am I the only one that doesn't get turned on by a sexy scene in yaoi when they're getting it on in public? I know it's all fantasy, but it's so unromantic and, in my opinion, not sexy at all. It completely kills the vibe. I guess I just imagine myself being in the same situation and I feel uncomfortable.
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