The plot is a ok tiers, although

Laeana November 14, 2023 10:47 pm

Tbh I didn’t dislike this at all. The FL is strong enough, she can actually wield a sword and fend for herself yay! The ML is … a tad possessive and obsessive, like I mean I get you like her but you don’t get to create false rumors and to chase her suitors, she’s not an object she can do whatever you want the fact you like her do not mean it HAS to be reciprocated. The relationship still feels alright and the jump of five years do work as the story prepares for it. The plot could have been worked better I think though. Cause like there is some parts that are still mysterious or hard to understand ? Cause in the first place she says that she reincarnated into Ariel and she lived twice, but are both true ? And if she reincarnated the reason is never explained. I actually did enjoy the fact that it was the ML’s power and that their memories only came back later in the story, that’s a good plot twist kinda. I hated Killian and I was sad cause I thought he could make a good character but he ended up being an ass that could be easily overturned by money and betray the main characters then come back like “I like you, hope we see each other again” how about never b*tch ? Like materialistic reasons are a thing but he said he makes short contract on purpose so that’s just fun to work for enemies, to betray people? And you expect them to be fine with it ? Just no, that just make you a shitty person. When I said about plot that could be better used I also think about that random emperor appearing out of nowhere to tell the ML how to control his powers. How convenient ! There could have been some lore there, some introduction earlier about him but nah why bother, let’s just make a guy with a crown and violet eyes being “have FAITH”.

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