It's like I'm lost throught the whole time and everything is a recap.

Yuchan November 9, 2023 2:11 am

Just started this and the flow of this story is so weird. Just me? It's hard for me to follow.

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    Cloverfr November 9, 2023 2:48 am

    You are no alone, I'm on ch 4, the story at the start it's a mess x_x

    Yuchan November 9, 2023 4:50 am
    You are no alone, I'm on ch 4, the story at the start it's a mess x_x Cloverfr

    I catched up. And it just is not making sense story wise. :( lost potential, nothing is happening in real time and events are over before they begin.

    Cloverfr November 9, 2023 8:30 pm
    I catched up. And it just is not making sense story wise. :( lost potential, nothing is happening in real time and events are over before they begin. Yuchan

    The sad part it's that there is potential, it could have being great, it's like the author doesn't know how to tell a story.

    Yuchan November 10, 2023 3:17 am
    The sad part it's that there is potential, it could have being great, it's like the author doesn't know how to tell a story. Cloverfr

    Yeah I can tell this must be a novel because everything is lore. Sad they don't know how to make it a web story