Some of y'all about to be mad

Levi was triggered. Lol!

I couldn't have said it BETTER!!! PREACH!!!

One of the reasons why I adore TM

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One of the reasons why I adore TM, such an admirable person

I thought so!

Your welcome, and if I had the story fresh in my head I probably would have gave more! It seems they need someone to hold their hand and explain the complexity of this story. Why do they keep wanting to add romance?
They need to go read BJ Alex. Levi is person trolling. They are harming people instead of talking to them. They do seem unstable. They add so much to the story they miss the real story. It is a slow burn. They need to understand that.

Jaekyung is bad at admitting to things. Like: “ I hate flowers”. No dude you are jealous. lol. He is bad at communicating and doesn’t have those skills to I guess?
It could be because of your reasoning.

With Silent I wish the same. But unfortunately, I have stopped reading her comments due to what I believe was a misunderstanding between us but she took harmless DM comments and made it look more when she threw us under the bus when someone else lied on someone’s else gaslighting post.
The gaslighting post was a complete lie. They were harassing us and on one was harassing that person. Tora and I were not even making comments but accused of harassing them. One was a new account. That one account was the one person who talked to the OP. The rest either avoided her or were not making comments. People believe the OP on her lies.

Some one came in talking about how they got multiple DM from different people but they only got two messages from Tora. Tora only asked them if they wanted him to talk to me. The word apologize was not even in Tora’s messages. But Silent believed that lie.
I will never understand Slient’s response. “ So the dm thing wasn't just happening to me. Good to know”. She implied it was a bad thing.
What happened: She had me blocked and I noticed she seemed genuine. So I ask Tora to DM her asking why. Then his second response was like a month later saying I couldn’t DM her for a gitch. His DM messages were harmless to her. She quickly threw him under the bus on a lie.
My replies were harmless and friendly. One she believed I was assuming her thoughts but I was just pleading with her. So, she is quick to believe the lies from the trolls.
She also told me 10/09/2023 in DM “You won’t see me in the Jinx section again” she has been here many times. That is okay. That is her decision and she is welcomed here. I told her I wanted her to be here in my next reply.
So I really don’t understand why she threw us under the bus.
I don’t like bringing up what is said in private up but I have a point. This is more about me than her.

However, I will say this soon no one will see me as TM SM YZ in Jinx section again once I deleted this damage account with all the character assassination from the trolls.
She does seem cool but be careful. I have been slient for weeks. The drama still exists. I never caused it or created it. I only step up to the existing drama. That drama will was be here. I was just made a joke and a target because I wanted to make this a safe space for ALL comments but trolls being trolls with their gaslighting are always going to be here harming people. They are just trying to blame others.

That is one of the worst explanations for a character. This is a fictional romance novel, not real life. You need to develop a reason for your characters to be together. That is a core aspect of a relationship that quite literally has been told time and time again when writing a story, especially a romance story. That is a fact. The ML has no clear motivations as to why he treats him like that. From what I am gathering you are trying to make up excuses as to why his character acts that way, but that's the issue his character hasn't been fleshed out. You need to flesh out a character in order for a good story. Within those 38 chapters the author could have added a backstory, define a clear reason as to why they're together. A better reason overall. I don't expect this sorry to be fluffy or soft. But what I and others are criticizing is it's lack of writing. This story just doesn't care about it's characters. They have very little defining characteristics. I am going to say this in the nicest way possible, but you are coming up with reasons that are not there. Those are not qualities of a well written character. Those are just surface level reasons that just aren't present. This story is aiming for the characters to be together by a scrapping pieces to make a story. Not a well written one. Please realize that it is important as an author to develop your characters as early as you can. So that you can develop them properly over the course of the story. Yes it is the authors story, and I'm allowed to critic it any way I want.

Although full volume is not super well written it is still better than jinx with developing a relationship with the characters and defining a reason as to why they should be together and why they are together. 19 days are short because the author chooses to make them short and has way better writing than jinx. The personalities you claim are present in jinx really aren't there. I am criticizing them based on the important factors of what makes a good character. 19 days is much better than jinx and that is a fact. Those characters have motivations, are complex, have back stories, and are better at developing the characters overtime. Jinx isn't a good story. You seem to be a big fan of the author and that may be clouding your judgement to critically engage with this content

You are absolutely disgusting to use rape and sexual assault to disprove of what that comment said. They are correct in their critique of this story. Rape is rape no matter how much you want to defend in this story. For you to claim they are trolling is hilarious. They had good points that you refuse to listen to. What the ML did in this story is rape. Though fictional. It is a romanticization of rape. For the love of God listen and stop being offended

LOLL not those two slow folks having matches in the comments… it’s sad. didn’t reply to the first weirdo because their opinion isn’t worth hearing out or replying to. they can argue with themselves, i know they need the daily mental stimulation they can’t get with real people. read maybe until the second half of TM’s, until i realized they need medical attention for using therapy words OVER A DEBATE ABOUT RAPE AND A FICTIONAL STORY? LMAO?? both of y’all have no common sense and it’s clear that you’re unstable when it comes to this story. relax, no one is gaslighting you for saying there is rape or trying to explain their perspective. i think this story created the worst breeds of yaoi diehards because obviously the rape defenders stuck together like the birds they are. im begging you to post your opinion on a reddit forum and see what rational people think about your dissection of the characters/story. because safe to say, most porn addicts and incels will agree with you while the majority will offer insight that you probably can’t even begin to comprehend. have fun

they like personal attacks and victimizing themselves > valid explanations. it feeds their ego and need for people to talk to them :(

you’re kind for being patient and STILL trying to explain your perspective while also staying true that this is only a personal opinion that doesn’t affect anyone

You clearly don't know what a complex character is. What you just listed are not aspects of a character, the clues you say are not even present, I mean what are his actual reasons for staying together with Dan? Dan isn't a good character either. He doesn't even have a clear reason as to why he is in this relationship. My opinion is not a personal attack. Do you think this sorry is going to get an A+ when the characters aren't even realistic in their motivations or actions? The story isn't complex. It simply just evolves off of tropes. I understand Dan from a perspective of a writer. He as a motivationan. His grandmother and her health. He needs money. So he trades sex for money. A transaction. But we don't evolve from there. Sure there's a push towards the plot, but it's barley there The only things that are present is quite literally the sex. That's the selling pint of the story. A very bad story. The author can develop a sex scene, but not a plot. To claim their is no rape is funny. The literal definition of rape is to force intercourse onto a person. That is what the ML has done within this story. I am simply frustrated because you and that other person cannot even tell what a good character looks like.

I have you explanations. You just don't understand them. To claim that I am insecure is very funny. I am secure in my opinion and I have expressed that. Of course there is a level of unrealistic plot points in a story that is a given. But with any story there is always going to need to be a realistic outcome in how a character reacts or acts within a situation. A sex scene is not a plot. It is just something that adds to a plot and should not be a plot unless it is explicitly said to be. This is not a realistic outcome of what a trauma victim would react like realistically. If this is what you claim a good written trauma development then my god you need help. If you cannot handle constructive criticism of a story you like than maybe you should not be trying to critic what I said. I pointed out errors in this story that are not present. I gave a reason and explained. And as I said you are going based of what is entertaining to you and not the story as a whole. This is a story that doesn't care about fleshing out it's characters. Any person who reads my comments would understand what I am saying. You cannot.

Yeah it's getting pretty tiring that they keep attacking you. Your right in what you said. I'm trying to get my point across but man, if they were against up a professional writer they would not win

"You are absolutely disgusting to use rape and sexual assault to disprove of what that comment said. "

That is abusive and an insult. When you judge others, you don't define them, you define yourself. You are not harming me. You are degrading yourself. You can't handle a civil conversation or handle being wrong. You have to attack and gaslight.
That is abusive. That is what is disgusting. I am not your toy to feel about about yourself. If you have a miserable life, you should find more productive ways for feeling better for yourself instead of harming others. That is what is disgusting.



"They are correct in their critique of this story."
Why say that? I have critique this story. That was unnecessary and irrelevant.

" Rape is rape" I agree.
" no matter how much you want to defend in this story." i am not defending this story. STOP! I am stating the truth. There is no rape in Jinx. you are adding it.


" For you to claim they are trolling is hilarious." Thank you for exposing yourself to being sadistic. You should not be gaining pleasure from them harming others in their trolling. I am not claiming anything. Read their comments. Your comments are coming from as a troll too. "make a deliberately offensive or provocative online post with the aim of upsetting someone or eliciting an angry response from them:"

Trolling is from cowards.

"They had good points that you refuse to listen to." That is a FALSE!


"What the ML did in this story is rape. " Your pov and it is not accurate to the story.

"For the love of God listen and stop being offended" That does not fit to me. Good advice for you. Why do not you listen and stop making BS up. Stop being offended. You have no effect on me. Your comments are boring and a joke.

"You clearly don't know what a complex character is. "

Is attacking and trolling all you know to do? boring. You are talking about yourself.

"What you just listed are not aspects of a character, the clues you say are not even present, I mean what are his actual reasons for staying together with Dan? "
Why should I talk and explain it to someone only interested to making me a toy? I am not your toy. Find your amusement elsewhere. I can't take you seriously with all you abusive comments. You are degraded yourself to a status of a troll.

"Dan isn't a good character either." He is much better than you. Your "opinions" are personal attacks. Learn how to talk without at pathetic attacks. Why do you have to feel superior and make others feel inferior? Why do you have to harm others to talk to them? You are more toxic than the story is. The story is fake. I am a real person you are trying to degrade to feel better about yourself.

Why should I waste myself on you when you are deep rooted in your false beliefs while attacking me? Then you tried to justify those attacks as opinions. You called me disgusting but that is just projecting.

"Do you think this sorry is going to get an A+ when the characters aren't even realistic in their motivations or actions?" Are you sure about that? Why say that nonsense with that too.

"The story isn't complex." Yes it is. I am not buying your lies.

From your reviews, you are not a writer. If you were a writer you would see how it has evolved. You would Jaekyung for who he really is. You would understand Dan. You would know it is not rape. You would know it is literally not just sex. It could be a better story. I have said many times it is dull story. I wished it was better. I wished you were treating me better. It is disgusting how you are treating others.
I think the claim there is rape for most is either not looking at the story or being uneducated. They don't understand what rape really is. The literal definition as you posted it, debunks rape in Jinx. That is not what happens in Jinx. You failed to understand the story, Dan, and Jaekyung.
Do you even know what a good character looks like? You can't even see the real characters here.

I can't stop laughting at levi who is trolling. Which by the way, I don't think i called a troll. "And that levi person is a person who trolls to stir up trouble." I talked about them trolling. It about their actions. But if the shoes fits..


"LOLL not those two slow folks having matches in the comments"
that is comment from a troll and not describing me or Manhwaspicy.


"didn’t reply to the first weirdo because their opinion isn’t worth hearing out or replying to. "

An atttack showing they lost. A trolling comment.


"they can argue with themselves"

That does not describe me or Manhwaspicy.


"i know they need the daily mental stimulation they can’t get with real people."

That does not describe me or Manhwaspicy. Another trolling comment.


"read maybe until the second half of TM’s, until i realized they need medical attention for using therapy words OVER A DEBATE ABOUT RAPE AND A FICTIONAL STORY? LMAO?? "

More trolling.. Boring boring boring. They are talking about themselves. They are the ones who needs it. I don't.



"both of y’all have no common sense"

More trolling. This is not describing me or Manhwaspicy.


"and it’s clear that you’re unstable when it comes to this story."

That is not describing me or Manhwaspicy. More trolling. Pathetic. This person must have a miserable live to have to harm others to feel better about themselves.

"relax, no one is gaslighting you for saying there is rape or trying to explain their perspective."
Yes, people are gaslighting. People are trying explain a fake perspective. While I am trying to be factual and explain the story's perspective. They get scared and attack me. They show their immaturity and chlid-like behavior because they know they are wrong they go to gaslighting and attacking me.


"i think this story created the worst breeds of yaoi diehards because obviously the rape defenders stuck together like the birds they are."

What an abusive and disgusting thing. But this story has created the worst kind of people trolling to harm others. There are no rape defenders. We are not reap defenders from your pathetic pov that is not accurate to the story. You are a rape pov defender. You are going to great lengths to make it rape.
disgusting.

I think personal attacks are disgusting and immature. I don't like that. I don't and never victimizing myself. Disgusting and that is more boring trolling. trolling is for cowards.
There is no valid explanations here.
"it feeds their ego and need for people to talk to them :("
Projection. That is not describing me or Manhwaspicy.

"you’re kind for being patient and STILL trying to explain your perspective while also staying true that this is only a personal opinion that doesn’t affect anyone"

What comment thread are you reading? lol

Trolling degrades the troll. lol

tm- balls in their mouth- yz needs to stop cosplaying an introspective person and read real books for once not just smut bl im praying for you. we live in a world where calling out rape, for what is is, means you’re trolling. im laughing at you for thinking this opinion has gotten u somewhere when the arguments have not only been baseless but proving that jae is in fact raping dan and he’s one dimensional in the story so far

https://www.rainn.org/articles/sexual-assault

saying no to sex = rape
saying stop to sex = rape
not having the power to give consent to sex = rape
giving sex against your will = rape
should i keep going?

not surprising your ideas on sexual adult and rape are skewed but i genuinely wish the best for you to figure it out instead of changing the narrative that jae feels an ounce of sympathy for dan or even remotely cares about him in a healthy way. the traits you’ve given jae are all your head cannons and haven’t been explained in the slightest- those were your interpretations based on what you want them to mean

Omg you are making yourself a victim in a situation where all I did and the other person were pointing out writing errors in a story. You just confirmed my belief that you are not analyzing the story based on story or character elements busy based off what you perceived to be entertaining lm I called you disgusting because you tried to justify rape in this story that I am correct about. You are offended and that is ok. You cannot articulate your feelings without being offended, and so you call anyone who disagrees with you a gaslighter. I have an opinion. That's all I did. you are the most sensitive person I have ever met. Like you can't take constructive criticism so you lash out on anyone that disagrees with you. That isn't a trait you want to have. Please reevaluate yourself and reread everything I wrote verses what you wrote. The only person who is gaslighting you is yourself. Stop trying to play the victim in a situation where you are not

Lol you just proved my point. You are offended and you just defended rape lol. You said your not then in the same sentence you claim it's not rape. I feel bad for you. You are clearly a narcissist. You make yourself look like the victim in a situation where all I did and others are critique your opinion, by stating the obvious. I am a writer because I know I can see the good and bad in stories. That I can evaluate others options and not be offended unlike you. No one is abusing you. You can't handle the heat then maybe you should not be on the Internet. If this is what trolling is then you wouldn't survive in a writing class or in the real world. You are an embarrassment. Playing the victim when someone points out something wrong with what you said is . I hope God can bless you to be smarter than that.

No. You are wrong.

A romance story doesn't necessarily need to have a reason for the characters to be together. It isn't any core aspect. What is the reason for the characters to be together in a relationship?? Love…if both partners love each other, that is literally the only reason. Apart from that, what else? Is that how love works? To have a reason? Mafia romance stories, do they have a reason for being together? Or arranged marriage romance? Any reason. Love doesn't need to have a reason to progress. It just happens. You have no point there. Fiction or not.

You are allowed to criticize a story, but what becomes the aftermath? Nothing…you gain nothing but only add to the popularity of the book. You are not an official author to state such unreasonable things. Send me one of your books let me analyze it.

You are only stating how impatient you are with the book. You are talking about the back story? With the way the story line is progressing, where would be best to add a backstory? If I were mingwa, I would choose to expose JK’s back story in season 2 and I'm definitely sure that's where mingwa is headed. Many books have gone with that procedure, like Painter of the Night. The pacing was so perfect. You're showing more of how bad of an author you are. You are cliche.