it feels as if the story doesn’t know whether or not to commit to focusing on a romance or on a plot. I found the beginning to be pretty interesting, there was an effort to immerse the reader in the world and focused on small details like the method of telling time and the currency which I really enjoyed. As for the romance, I thought using sexual intimacy as a “cure” for magic sickness was not just incredibly lazy, but unromantic. It feels as an easy segue into a relationship, but not one I can get invested in at all. I’m certain there are hundreds of other options that the author could come up with that would cure magic sickness in a way that’s much more romantic than essentially meaningless sex. I really like the concept and the world building, I just wish the romance was different from the beginning. I find it hard to get invested now that it started in a way that feels off.
it feels as if the story doesn’t know whether or not to commit to focusing on a romance or on a plot. I found the beginning to be pretty interesting, there was an effort to immerse the reader in the world and focused on small details like the method of telling time and the currency which I really enjoyed. As for the romance, I thought using sexual intimacy as a “cure” for magic sickness was not just incredibly lazy, but unromantic. It feels as an easy segue into a relationship, but not one I can get invested in at all. I’m certain there are hundreds of other options that the author could come up with that would cure magic sickness in a way that’s much more romantic than essentially meaningless sex. I really like the concept and the world building, I just wish the romance was different from the beginning. I find it hard to get invested now that it started in a way that feels off.