Responses
Honestly disappointed it didn't turn out to be theon like I like both currently and lowk wish for more scenes with theon but like Ethan just seems so manipulative still so that's why I'm gravitating towards theon more yk?
Yeah I know what you mean. I was the same untill I read further in the novel. I won’t spoil more unless you want me to :)
Please spoil me :<
Spoilers/review:
I really love the idea of this story and found myself tearing up throughout. I thought Dorthea would be the typical clueless FL but I wanted to read it because theon seemed promising.
Boy was I wrong. I relate so much with Dorthea and the way she is written makes sense 90% of the time. She has some issues "willful ignorance imo" but otherwise she's very relatable. Anyway, Theon is also not the male lead and I couldn't be happier, there are valid reasons for this other than Ethan being hotter which I like.
Only thing this story lacks is a compelling father figure. He doesn't feel like a real person but like a catalyst for Dorthea's trauma. if only he was written a little better like Claude ):
This is the most I have written about any story on here so I hope people can agree (: