This is so true. This story hasn't progressed at all.
Bye bye
what do you want, y’all will either complain about “it’s too fast jaekyung got off easy”. Only feels that way bc u have to actually wait for chapters, nd it’s obviously a slow burn. Imagine how ppl who read BJ alex felt vs the ones who waited for every chapter.
Sorry, but BJ alex had a good pacing. This just isn't moving at all and that's not my only complaint. The characters are even worse. BJ alex just got boring in the end, but the beginning had good pacing and the character development was very believable in good context. This man over here in this story will need a fucking miracle at this point.
Cause
- an almost dead grandmother
- almost getting raped
- being abused by loan sharks
- being in a poor housing situation
- being sick
- crying in fear
- fighting against him in pure panic
wasn't enough for this asshole to redeem himself.
That's what bugs me. Cause what the hell will?
And if something suddenly does and it's less than anything on this list, it would just be unbelievable and stupid and that's that.
And there are overall some plot holes that don't make the storyline believable. Like why the fuck is that asshole even interested in doc Dan for so long? LIke what makes him special. If he's had a taste of everything, then why? It makes no sense at all, cause there is literally nothing in that dumb ass dense Dan that makes him different to any other person cause he doesn't even have a personality. Like an author has to think about these kind of things. It just takes me out of the story cause it wouldn't make sense.
Season 2 will confirm everything. Have we ever read this story from JK’s POV? No, we have not…so we literally know nothing about how he thinks and feels.
In my opinion, the pacing is good based on their personalities, you won't just expect someone like Jk to change overnight. Let's trust the author and see how things go!
i just strongly dislike Dan. LIke I can't get over how pathetic he is. So I don't really want to see where it goes. I feel like I've given it enough of my time. The author is just not for me. The ukes are to boring.
Omg, I know right. Dan is such a pushover and it's damn annoying. But I think I kind of understand why he acts that way. Jk is literally the only person who has helped him this much despite being poor, bullied/ almost gang-raped by loan sharks, and sexually harassed in his workplace which led to being fired. Jk paid off his debts…he did a lot of good things for Dan including accompanying his grandma. He's literally under Jk. Once anyone gets under a high authority, they often become more submissive and vulnerable especially when they have no power.
I can see that, but like in the beginning... When he fucking took any mean comments and shitty behavior. It just annoys me. Like idk if you've read painter of the night, but like Nakyum (the uke) is also really submissive, but you know he doesn't go down without a fight and he'll need some real manipulation to do everything the other says. Dan is just doing this even though this ain't okay at all. I think it's just hard for me to relate to his behavior cause I do have self respect and definitely am ready to fight this Jk (JOKE) of a bitch wahahaha, but okay.
I feel the same.
okay sorry valid
I just wanted to make a thourough point, with good ass arguments, but I guess I went a little overboard. sorry
There’s plenty of troupes I strongly dislike in bl and pushover ukes/bottoms are near the top.
Doc Dan was tolerable in the beginning but like he gotten so much worst with his self thought dialogues. Like It’s so fucking cringe reading it, like I can’t even pity him bc he’s just accepts the abuse and thinks it his fault for “bothering jk”, oh fucking please.
Just like you said, he has no “self respect”.
I haven’t felt more annoyed about a bottom like doc Dan, since the bottom from kiss me liar (yeonwoo).
Yeah I know righttttt! Like he was okay in the beginning. Obviously weighing his chances and in fear accepting things and even hit him once in pure panic to try and fight back. But now he's as dense as some dumb ass rock. Like it makes me want to vomit when he makes himself the problem the whole time and says "sorry" a 100000000 times ughhh
I swear to GOD! If it weren’t for for the side couple I would of DROP this shit and stick to just reading the raws or spoilers!
I’m already getting tired of seeing the main duo and we just HAVE to have a sex scene next chapter
yeahhhh! I literally skip through the sex scenes cause there almost painful to watch. There's no connection between them, so it doesn't really seem real. The author is so talented so it's definitely not her art style that's ruining it... LIKE why are the sex scenes so boring and why is there so many?
The sex scenes are either so boring, cringe, or straight up disgusting.
The pool scene for instance was a MAJOR turn off and literally like two chapters later there was the blindfold hyesung scene….
This story truly up there with a “waste of good art” BLs.
Yeah omg I'm so glad I'm not the only one that like literally felt disgusted during those sex scenes. Like what are they supposed to achieve? They're is really no evolution through their sex life so it's just boring. And when she tries to spice things up it's in the wrong way. Like the fuck. Why blindfold him? Make him cry for emotional effect, but then do absolutely nothing and never mention it again? THE FUCK
Like seriously, what the fuck has happened since chapter 3. He got him to work for him and that's about it. Don't get me wrong a lot has happened, but that had literally NO impact on our characters. You read the story to see where it takes the characters, but this piece of shit is still the SAME disgusting selfish horrible mean fuck as chapter fucking 1. He had so many fucking reasons to redeem himself, but he didn't take even one. Don't even get me started on that annoying ass piece of a Dan. Someone needs to teach him some self respect, cause he just takes whatever shit he gets without even caring AND then even acts as if he should be fucking grateful. I love submissive ukes, but don't lose your self respect and try to maybe put up a fight when you're treated like shit. Cause this is just pathetic and boring.
I should've given up ages ago. Don't even know why I'm reading it. I thought I had the interesting storyline in my head, but I'm not reading a story that has nowhere to go. Seems like the author is okay with that, but I'm fucking done.