An alright story written by a seemingly inexperienced author. I can see where they were trying to go with it, and it's a good story idea, the execution is just flawed.
The characters were all bland, and the story was rushed where it shouldn't have been, and slow in the most annoying of ways. For example, the characters just randomly fell in love, mc randomly changed her mind and resolve to be queen. I understand why, but like the author spent too little time developing her relationship with the previous queen that her love and understanding of her just feels forced?
I wish the author took more time developing relationships and emotions in it. They could have delved further into their childhoods to bring us a better understanding on why the prince and mc were traumatized. I feel like they just told us they were mistreated, and just left it at that, didn't really give us the chance to get to know any of the characters.
But, it's okay I guess. It was a pretty quick read and if you're an isekai hoe like me, it's enough to binge read. I didn't get absolutely tired of it until chapter 78, that's when it really became insufferable
An alright story written by a seemingly inexperienced author. I can see where they were trying to go with it, and it's a good story idea, the execution is just flawed.
The characters were all bland, and the story was rushed where it shouldn't have been, and slow in the most annoying of ways. For example, the characters just randomly fell in love, mc randomly changed her mind and resolve to be queen. I understand why, but like the author spent too little time developing her relationship with the previous queen that her love and understanding of her just feels forced?
I wish the author took more time developing relationships and emotions in it. They could have delved further into their childhoods to bring us a better understanding on why the prince and mc were traumatized. I feel like they just told us they were mistreated, and just left it at that, didn't really give us the chance to get to know any of the characters.
But, it's okay I guess. It was a pretty quick read and if you're an isekai hoe like me, it's enough to binge read. I didn't get absolutely tired of it until chapter 78, that's when it really became insufferable