The ending is so obnoxious likeeee the author is trying sooo hard to make the ml's murder ...

eggbenedict November 4, 2023 1:20 am

The ending is so obnoxious likeeee the author is trying sooo hard to make the ml's murder justifiable and the mc somehow mentally sane (the logic aint flowing at this point but eh)

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    eggbenedict November 4, 2023 1:26 am

    Like if ur trying to somehow make a moral stand (lmaoooo i swear for me thats how the author tryna point at the end) atleast make it make the mc slap him in the face and show him how he badly destroy his life but still loves him regardless, not this mess of an ending like what

    benito November 4, 2023 2:17 am

    what I was thinking. For me, what I think is that either he goes to prison or they both dont gaf about the victims. And the last part... weird

    YuzukiMikage November 4, 2023 7:27 am
    what I was thinking. For me, what I think is that either he goes to prison or they both dont gaf about the victims. And the last part... weird benito

    It was so unexpected for the author to self insert themselves

    San san November 4, 2023 6:40 pm
    Like if ur trying to somehow make a moral stand (lmaoooo i swear for me thats how the author tryna point at the end) atleast make it make the mc slap him in the face and show him how he badly destroy his life b... eggbenedict

    Well he does feel guilty and would go to prison if that was what Taichi wanted but it isn't Taichi ended up loving him and with all that time away from deeta ( when he got shot and was avoiding taichi) taichi didn't want to be away from him any longer so this is how ends meh

    Blackpearl November 5, 2023 7:28 am

    Right? It got too serious and bro actually tried to justify it - i would just make a joke ending

    benito November 5, 2023 8:37 am

    Deadass it was out of the blue how he changes expressions and says some dumb shit

    eggbenedict November 5, 2023 12:49 pm
    Well he does feel guilty and would go to prison if that was what Taichi wanted but it isn't Taichi ended up loving him and with all that time away from deeta ( when he got shot and was avoiding taichi) taichi ... San san

    True, but the thing is, is just suddenly got so serious like the conscience shows up and prob ptsd but then the author said that bs along the end like skskksksks i swear the author can make that shit work but not this cause wtf lol