Story had potential but....

Ayka November 2, 2023 4:34 am

I liked the art and learning about the types of grapes grown in different regions of Italy but wasn't that into the characters. The MC was racist and assumed the uke was a drug dealer because he was a Roma. He also hit the uke when he found out about the infidelity. Sure the uke was shit for what he did but Idk if he deserved to be beaten for it. Getting hit brought back tragic memories for the uke which the author though was good excuse for why the uke cheated. Even when he realized how he felt about the seme, he still went and slept with someone else and then slept with the seme the very next day and everything was alright between them. WTF?

I think the story could have been better if some time had passed between them. Like the uke could have gotten some therapy to deal with the tragedy of his childhood and the seme would have learned to love himself more and had time to forgive the uke for what he did and they could have met again and started on a new clean slate as better people but growth between them was forced too quickly.

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    jubi March 16, 2024 10:41 am

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