The way the story is told is sometimes pretty bad, I don’t know if it’s because of the...

The way the story is told is sometimes pretty bad, I don’t know if it’s because of the translation but it feels like there’s elements left out.
Like why were MC and his buddy depressed ? Did he get introduced in the story actually? I don’t remember that guy being introduced as a character, he just popped up. Also, that Jeremy guy is an undercover bandit right ? The phrase introducing him wasn’t clear..
so much plot holes I feel ..
Well it’s still good to read, not very good but good enough to enjoy if not taken too seriously