So much lost potential.....

Sael November 1, 2023 8:42 pm

Ngl the beginning of this story is really good, but if you read the light novel like I did it gets really convoluted and confusing and the plot kinda derails. I get why the manga ended and why it ended where it did lol. Don't try to read the light novel, trust me mate.

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    入間✻ March 29, 2024 12:24 am

    Lmao it is bad? Or what, aaaaaa im curious

    Sael April 17, 2024 5:25 am
    Lmao it is bad? Or what, aaaaaa im curious 入間✻

    It just spirals in a weird direction and the writing turns into incoherent garbage. There's a kidnapper plot that drags on way too long and the MC rambles about nothing for a good chunk of it. I don't remember much past that but I recall the writing becoming kinda nonsensical and the characters starting to lose personality and do strange things. At one point the ML tries to explain smth serious to the MC and she was like "Grrr I'm so angry I'm gonna go outside and SCREAM." Does it, and then just goes back and continues the convo w/ the ML? And he's like, chill with it? Idk, that's just one ex, but it was jarring and I found it super hard to read past that.