I really like most of this but

random piece of toxh!t November 1, 2023 2:14 pm

I am actually long story enjoyer, those stories that are worth it with great payoffs. I could see potential in this but... There's something about these cwebtoons that wants you to maybe consider hiring a team that knows how to develop graphic stories. Its great on its own but maybe adapt it in a way thats cuts those long set of events that doesn't pay much and maybe don't shake the angle too much from panels to panels, and also add another panel on scenes to feel emotions. LIKE WATCH THE COMPOSITION!

Im not an expert on webtoon making but I know a great story when I see one.

PS.
Goddess Nyx is cute and I want to see more of her.

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