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yah but if this was her debut work, it kinda makes sense she has a ton of great ideas and lore but little methods to really piece it together. tbh with everything in this, this type of work might've been better to have done a bit later into her career when she has more experience to really piece it together, but it's also really good given everything.
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this BIG time. like yes i understand the overall plot but all the small this were glossed over and if i didnt read that authors note id have no idea what most of the stuff was supposed to mean. i feel like translation was off bc some dialogues happen and im like wtf are they talking about… other than that beautiful art and a cool story
It’s funny to me how the author has to explain the manwha all throughout Q&A. Like she really couldn’t properly convey the intention through her writing. If you skip the question section in her works, you’re left with so many unresolved things. And I appreciate that she answers those mysteries. But you can clearly tell she’s all over the place with her ideas. What’s the point of writing a story if the story itself won’t solve the mysteries? Imagine a writer writing a book and leaving all this questions out there. Writers don’t have a “creators note”. That’s why I think so many big authors send their congratulations drawings. As a way to encourage her. Or there was a huge “lost in translation” issue with this story. Because out of all the BL stories I’ve read, this is the one with most lore and such little use of it. This story should have had at least 80 chapters. Oh well, I hope her future works are a bit more out together. It was an interesting universe she created.