Bad fight scenes

Chimo~ October 29, 2023 10:39 am

Have to drop it at chapter 18. I appreciate the artist's effort, but the first fight scene with ghosts doesn't make sense. It was badly executed, I don't know where or who she's hitting, and the perspective and movements of everyone and the ghosts don't match in each panel. Plus the bad translation and placing of the large sound effects obstruct the smoothness of reading. I had hopes in the first chapters but sadly, I can't continue reading it. My brain hurts as an artist looking at their scrambled movements. It was a good concept too :((

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