Idk, but why does it feel like it's rushed? Am i missing something??😭

Yoongles October 21, 2023 1:50 pm

Idk, but why does it feel like it's rushed? Am i missing something??

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    pennyinheaven October 21, 2023 2:54 pm

    Ikr? It’s like something is messy. The delivery, pacing, motive or something. I’m used to angst but usually I can follow why or where it’s all coming from but these last few chapters somewhat missed the pace or something. The reason for the angst feels lost.

    Yoongles October 21, 2023 5:05 pm
    Ikr? It’s like something is messy. The delivery, pacing, motive or something. I’m used to angst but usually I can follow why or where it’s all coming from but these last few chapters somewhat missed the p... pennyinheaven

    I mean, dude just got rescued from kidnapping and the next moment was them fcking. Like, huh??? I think based on the timeline the kidnapping happened few days ago like 2-3 days but his bruises are gone even the scar on the face

    pennyinheaven October 23, 2023 6:50 am
    I mean, dude just got rescued from kidnapping and the next moment was them fcking. Like, huh??? I think based on the timeline the kidnapping happened few days ago like 2-3 days but his bruises are gone even the... Yoongles

    Exactly!! They could’ve added, idk, like ā€œ2 weeks laterā€ or something.