Again, it's not hard to just write both Main characters with actual human dialogue and emo...

BeMyLover October 16, 2023 6:41 am

Again, it's not hard to just write both Main characters with actual human dialogue and emotions. Jaekyung can be frustrated by his developing feelings and also his medical information being leaked. That's okay, but the idea he can't just use words and just say he doesn't need any comfort (just be standoffish and cold) can get his point across without it being too toxic to handle.
My dude literally shoved his 12 in d**k in Dan without and ounce of prep work...like Dan should have been in tears and shouting in pain. Like y'all authors gotta stop writing anal sex like it's just sticking you tongue into someone's mouth. Foreplay and Prep saves lives and buttholes.
As for Dan...why is he making excuses for Jaekyung for no reason, half the crap he mentioned was barely the bare minimum (maybe outside of paying for gmom's bills). Dan saying Jae has it worse as his butt is being shredded with warning has to be the most bizarre thing I read.

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    Alex October 16, 2023 8:39 am

    I agree with you about how damn wrong and uneducated is the way these people write that anal sex is so easy, "just a walk in the park". If it was even a little realistic Dan is going to bleed and suffer horrible pain after this huge son of a b*tch just r*ped him, but no, you have him there worried about how much Jaekyung 'suffers' instead of how much his anus must be hurting.
    Seriously, was it that difficult to give the character a functional mind? Or will the story have a twist in which Dan is unable to feel pain?
    These authors are a joke. Sometimes I wonder what the hell is wrong with their minds.

    tarspoon October 16, 2023 9:49 am

    Anus is treated like a vagina, quite common in yaoi (though even vaginal sex requires foreplay). The reader is expected to contain his disbelief and to not think about bottom having a prolapsed anus after such sexual intercourse. ( ̄∇ ̄")

    BeMyLover October 17, 2023 4:36 am
    I agree with you about how damn wrong and uneducated is the way these people write that anal sex is so easy, "just a walk in the park". If it was even a little realistic Dan is going to bleed and suffer horribl... Alex

    You know what you're right! Dan has to have a secret super power to take unconsenting d**k up his ass with zero pain or bleeding. Cause I have zero understanding how it's done at this point. Sex between two men is nothing new or strange, like Jaekyung is canonically gay from what it's seems since all of his sex partners are men. So why can't he seem to have any understanding of anal and making sure it's pleasurable? But I guess if it was pleasurable it wouldn't be r*pe and he would be a decent human being sadly

    BeMyLover October 17, 2023 4:38 am
    Anus is treated like a vagina, quite common in yaoi (though even vaginal sex requires foreplay). The reader is expected to contain his disbelief and to not think about bottom having a prolapsed anus after such ... tarspoon

    ╥﹏╥ I'm getting too old for this sh*t lol Authors gotta start growing with times man...

    tarspoon October 17, 2023 7:24 am
    ╥﹏╥ I'm getting too old for this sh*t lol Authors gotta start growing with times man... BeMyLover

    Same ( ̄へ ̄)

    Alex October 17, 2023 4:48 pm
    You know what you're right! Dan has to have a secret super power to take unconsenting d**k up his ass with zero pain or bleeding. Cause I have zero understanding how it's done at this point. Sex between two men... BeMyLover

    Jaekyung is a gay man who doesn't care about the pleasure of his sexual partners, as long as it's pleasurable for him, that's all he cares about. That damn piece of shit.
    I keep checking back to see how this story is going cause of the art style and cause I really want to see Dan being happy, but the author insists on making him more and more miserable.

    BeMyLover October 18, 2023 4:14 am
    Jaekyung is a gay man who doesn't care about the pleasure of his sexual partners, as long as it's pleasurable for him, that's all he cares about. That damn piece of shit.I keep checking back to see how this sto... Alex

    Yeah pretty much, I'm on the same boat as you. I check in here and there and just get disappointed and leave again. Honestly I think I'm also in a toxic relationship with this damn story lol

    Alex October 18, 2023 5:12 pm
    Yeah pretty much, I'm on the same boat as you. I check in here and there and just get disappointed and leave again. Honestly I think I'm also in a toxic relationship with this damn story lol BeMyLover

    We are both in a toxic relationship with this story. We hate it but we keep reading it. What a joke haha