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Alunares October 15, 2023 12:39 pm

Cliche story but good writing. I love the chemistry between them. And I love how the ml is so devoted to fl and also respectful. Her being a little bit naive in the second life is alright. I mean, nobody’s becoming immediately invincible just bc you get to live again. You’re still the same person. She just has a little bit more knowledge about the whole political situation only because she saw her brother giving the order to kill her. And that’s that. Nothing more. She’s pretty much still in the dark, I guess it will take a little bit longer to figure everything out.

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    Road October 18, 2023 12:53 pm

    very true, i think i will find it more 'cliche' if FL became a badass out of the blue, i like that she didn't know alot of what happened in the future, yes she witnessed some, but not all of it. how should i describe it, she feels more 'real'.
    also, ML's face is so much my type, not too pretty but handsomely manly hehehe

    Alunares October 19, 2023 6:23 pm
    very true, i think i will find it more 'cliche' if FL became a badass out of the blue, i like that she didn't know alot of what happened in the future, yes she witnessed some, but not all of it. how should i de... Road

    Yes I agree wholeheartedly, and the ML is also my type (≧∀≦)