You know you have fucked up on a character when everyone is tooting for the secondary coup...

lunaiddd October 4, 2023 7:07 am

You know you have fucked up on a character when everyone is tooting for the secondary couple. I really like the art but doc dan has no backbone anymore. He started of strong even during harsh circumstances and now he is constantly crying. The champion dude. He us just a mess. His 2 moods are angry and mean. He deadass pushed doc dan on the first chapter. THATS ASSAULT. This man needs THERAPY. I know its fiction but like....its also a story with writting. And sometimes writting can be bad. I cant rokt for the characters when they are acting like villains while not being actual villains

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    BAKAAJ October 4, 2023 7:23 am

    Welcome to Korean bl ╥﹏╥ all stories are messed up and every seme has the perfect body lmao idk kbl plots are so repetitive this story was predictable from a mile away ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    toilet terrorist October 4, 2023 7:56 am

    He nas done so many worse things than assault but also im pretty sure thats battery not assault. Assault is the more sevre charge and battery is like pushing someone or spitting on them..do tell me if im wrong

    MangaSanctuary October 4, 2023 9:20 am

    You're right, even if it's a smutty yaoi there was supposed to have a storyline and the treatment of plot it deserves. Yet we see a Dan blushing for Jaekyung in chap 35 after what the champion did to him in chapter 34... (??). It makes it look like what happened in the preview chap, and all the drama among the community that followed, was nonsense.
    For now the plot looks disjointed and infortunately I don't think it's in the priority for these authors to write a good plot. Most readers don't seem to care either as long as they get their dose of smut.
    If there sould be a resolution and "character development", then it'll problably brushed away with the same poor excuse of trope : "Oooh so then all this time when I was so moody and did all this to you, Dan, was because I was in love with you...?? Fuck! Let's fuck some more to prove it!" ( ̄へ ̄)