Ive gotten used to the authors inclination for metaphors or imageries, I just wished it had more coherence to it. It keeps switching from past to present and vice versa. There's vagueness to the disconnect between our MC understanding what idols do but pushing the idol away for "being different", and then saying, "yeah ok. It's the same, isn't it?" Which is a realistic irony, i know... there's just a lacking cohesion to how each scenario transitions.
(Like ngl, I was so damned annoyed by the idol's "courting strategy" but also by the roundabout speech and dialogues. And because of the writing, they look like fools in their own circus...which is another way to say theyre clumsy...but in my pov as a reader, that's a lot of 'noise' or useless chattering because the clumsy dialogues is too real..cant believe im saying that. But yknow how fictive dialogues needs more cohesion since it isn't real life, like a drama that is purposeful instead of listening to your neighbors rambling and affairs. Coz most of time, i got really lost by the point of it all, too much reading between the lines)
Ive gotten used to the authors inclination for metaphors or imageries, I just wished it had more coherence to it. It keeps switching from past to present and vice versa. There's vagueness to the disconnect between our MC understanding what idols do but pushing the idol away for "being different", and then saying, "yeah ok. It's the same, isn't it?" Which is a realistic irony, i know... there's just a lacking cohesion to how each scenario transitions.
(Like ngl, I was so damned annoyed by the idol's "courting strategy" but also by the roundabout speech and dialogues. And because of the writing, they look like fools in their own circus...which is another way to say theyre clumsy...but in my pov as a reader, that's a lot of 'noise' or useless chattering because the clumsy dialogues is too real..cant believe im saying that. But yknow how fictive dialogues needs more cohesion since it isn't real life, like a drama that is purposeful instead of listening to your neighbors rambling and affairs. Coz most of time, i got really lost by the point of it all, too much reading between the lines)