It was great. Kinda rushed but the sex scenes and art are to die for.
however... We never dove deep into their (specifically the parents, but yes the MCs also)’s development. You can tell it was one of those, “porn > plot” comics- which I’m typically cool with. But the whole Dads coupling up thing and the unresolved issues between the black haired dude and his own father feel so outta place. Like don’t get me wrong, it’s a fun concept and def a first of its kind, but I ended up disliking his dad after the son ranted about him in the last chapter and I’m kinda just left with that feeling w/ its end. All this to say I wish we dove deeper into their story. Like okay, I get it, they were childhood loves torn apart- but what about all the stuff in between?? Their lives led without each other- the women they had kids with and why big shot police man was such a cold bastard to his son— or even HOW and WHY they fell in and out of love with each other— the bits of the puzzle we’re missing. Idk. Maybe I’m just goofin
It was great. Kinda rushed but the sex scenes and art are to die for.
however...
We never dove deep into their (specifically the parents, but yes the MCs also)’s development. You can tell it was one of those, “porn > plot” comics- which I’m typically cool with.
But the whole Dads coupling up thing and the unresolved issues between the black haired dude and his own father feel so outta place. Like don’t get me wrong, it’s a fun concept and def a first of its kind, but I ended up disliking his dad after the son ranted about him in the last chapter and I’m kinda just left with that feeling w/ its end.
All this to say I wish we dove deeper into their story. Like okay, I get it, they were childhood loves torn apart- but what about all the stuff in between?? Their lives led without each other- the women they had kids with and why big shot police man was such a cold bastard to his son— or even HOW and WHY they fell in and out of love with each other— the bits of the puzzle we’re missing. Idk. Maybe I’m just goofin