Everything that sucks: - author makes it hard to suspend belief bc they try to justify everything in "realistic " terms -plot is derailed -writing quality drops -becomes a story about her fcking idol debut or whatever -what's with the whale?? -she completely forgets about the terrible trauma her family deals with -ML is one dimensional -FL is one dimensional -every single character is one dimensional -art quality also drops lmao fight me it's true -Mary Sue FL (but not in a fun way) -genre of the work is all over the place; it looses strength in particular aspects because it doesn't have any genre to anchor itself in besides it seeming like a self-indulgent work
Everything that sucks:
- author makes it hard to suspend belief bc they try to justify everything in "realistic " terms
-plot is derailed
-writing quality drops
-becomes a story about her fcking idol debut or whatever
-what's with the whale??
-she completely forgets about the terrible trauma her family deals with
-ML is one dimensional
-FL is one dimensional
-every single character is one dimensional
-art quality also drops lmao fight me it's true
-Mary Sue FL (but not in a fun way)
-genre of the work is all over the place; it looses strength in particular aspects because it doesn't have any genre to anchor itself in besides it seeming like a self-indulgent work