Spoiler No hate. I just feel like this manhwa is being rushed? Like suddenly he...

Assguard September 15, 2023 12:55 pm

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No hate. I just feel like this manhwa is being rushed? Like suddenly he has a bff? And the bullies he went back through time for are destroyed just like that? And honestly, I couldn't take this manhwa seriously after the sudden Golden Circle thing... I mean like how??? Everything seems forced for some reason...without warning.......
I don't want to say this but some other action comics have elements which are ridiculous irl but they're written and portrayed in such a way that the readers are constructed to believe that everything happening in the story are natural.... Those comics are well processed.
Tbh..The plot is brilliant and the art is impeccable but I feel something is not right with the progression. But that's just me I'm soryy.

Responses
    Gup September 22, 2023 1:29 am

    I could see what you are saying but the mc was smart by getting a big connection which help his plans so much. He just worked the system towards his favor. The bullies were never smart and wasn’t expecting this.

    Assguard September 24, 2023 9:19 am
    I could see what you are saying but the mc was smart by getting a big connection which help his plans so much. He just worked the system towards his favor. The bullies were never smart and wasn’t expecting th... Gup

    That is true. I'm ok with everything in the plot, but the way it is conveyed is not convincing. I'm sure it will improve over time like most manhwas do but as of now... This comic lacks proper elemental revelation.