Whenever the story introduces a dilemma its good, however the wrap around or conclusion to it feels flat, or vise versa. Notice how all of Nakyoung's problem gets solved by Mr. Kang. It's ok if Mr. Kang is the solution, but it feels like the author doesn't know how to provide any otherway to solve the issue. What feels forced for me was that scene in which he was kidnapped. He was already in a car. On his way home. To his apartment. That has parking and security guards. Also it was the first time that we saw him take an alleyway home. It wasn't shown in previous chapters that he needed to go through an alleyway to get home. He only got off the car for plot purposes.Ugh. Also timeline wise the first sex scenes (excluding the scandal from his previous life) were of Hanil at Hyunjae not from the protagonists Σ( ￣□￣||)
Whenever the story introduces a dilemma its good, however the wrap around or conclusion to it feels flat, or vise versa. Notice how all of Nakyoung's problem gets solved by Mr. Kang. It's ok if Mr. Kang is the solution, but it feels like the author doesn't know how to provide any otherway to solve the issue. What feels forced for me was that scene in which he was kidnapped. He was already in a car. On his way home. To his apartment. That has parking and security guards. Also it was the first time that we saw him take an alleyway home. It wasn't shown in previous chapters that he needed to go through an alleyway to get home. He only got off the car for plot purposes.Ugh. Also timeline wise the first sex scenes (excluding the scandal from his previous life) were of Hanil at Hyunjae not from the protagonists Σ( ￣□￣||)