Responses
I'm so glad I wasn't the only one thinking this.
Given the non-japanese speech bubbles, yet clearly manga inspired pages, maybe the author is korean (given the name choices) and they thought this was how japanese style cimics must be done?
Many things feel skipped. Little 'flavor panels' as I call them, that indicate a scene switch or just some environment detail being shown as well as switching scenes more smoothly is my biggest issue with this tbh.
Benefit of the doubt: Maybe it their first comic? If so it's quite decent, just needs some polishing to be perfect and up there with the big boys in the comic game. ^^
The story felt rushed and almost as if some chapters were missing.