Ten plot points, AND MORE SEX, pls! *****

Silent Lucidity September 12, 2023 4:59 pm

The sex scenes are amazing in this. but I need equal amounts of plot advancement, because that's also amazing. Look at all this going on:
1. Can't wait until Shin finds out that Jake's made him his "gangster wife". He's gonna be super pissed!

2. Jake is setting Ross up to take another hit to his dealer reputation, so he'll be back sooner rather than later.

3. Speaking of Ross- it seems he's caught some feels for Shin. Ugh. I think he might end up bringing his business back to Lump Spark because that's the only way he can get close to Shin at this point.

4. Shin has a lot on his plate. He feels responsible for Lump Spark's loss of clients, he's worried about Jake getting gunned down in the streets, and he knows Grens is so fucked up, he's unable take care of himself. Shin is really carrying a lot of baggage.

5. Jake knows Shin's going through it and is depressed. This is definitely affecting him too. It's looking like his highest priority right now is distracting Shin and trying to find ways to make things better for him. The only way to deal with both his relationship with Shin and his spy job is to combine the two. If the CIA Director finds out he's been doing this, she's not going to be happy about it.

6. Caesar is also worried about Shin and is sticking closer to him. Jealous Jake is not liking this.

7. Still waiting on Shin discovering Jake's true identity. How will he find out? Will Hosung's hackers finally break into the CIA server? Will Caesar get frustrated with Jake's stonewalling and tell Shin herself? Will Jake feel the need to tell him or will he fuck up and get caught, like he almost was when he was video-calling Caesar and making her show Shin to him? Will Shin discover or figure it out on his own? Or will the author pull some other crazy twist out of their hat?

8. Jake is pretty cocky in his confidence, but he's made A LOT of enemies. His luck isn't going to hold out forever, as Izmel pointed out to him.

9. Ross is suspicious of Jake. Benille is suspicious of Jake. Biker dude wants revenge on Jake. If Grens finds out about Jake's relationship with Shin, you know he's going to be jealous AND paranoid. Jake's plan is to get Ross and Benille thrown in jail and to kill the biker dude. Grens is a loose cannon, but it looks like Jake does have some use for him. We'll see how all those plans play out for him.

10. Most importantly, Shin is Jake's weakness. Somebody's bound to exploit that before this is all done.

Responses
    Beebs September 12, 2023 10:34 pm

    We can only hope all these issues don't crash in at once cause sheesh that would be a lot

    Silent Lucidity September 12, 2023 11:16 pm

    I forgot to add the one about Ross finding out about Shin and Jake's relationship. He knows Jake (in a police uniform) retrieved Shin from him at the Royal Roader, but seems to have forgotten about that for now. He just caught on that Shin's involved with least one other man, so it's just a matter of time before he works it out

    Gh0st September 15, 2023 4:14 pm

    Excited to see what the author does with everything. Thus far this has honestly been the best BL I've ever read, purely because the relationship advancement has been great and the plot is actually compelling and well done. I think it's sort of unspoken between Shin and Jake at this point that they care a lot more for eachother than they let on. Enough that it may make them both weak.

    Silent Lucidity September 15, 2023 9:08 pm
    Excited to see what the author does with everything. Thus far this has honestly been the best BL I've ever read, purely because the relationship advancement has been great and the plot is actually compelling an... Gh0st

    I agree with this so much! I really like when Shin shows how adamant he is about protecting Jake, and Jake is like, “That’s so hot!!” Kinda rare to see in a seme character. This is also the best BL I’ve ever read