I'm finding the story interesting. The art is not the best I've seen, but it is better than anything I could do, and more than adequate to convey the plot. The one thing that I'm finding moderately confusing, however, is the fact that we don't learn anything that doesn't come out of a character's mouth. That means, outside of the dragon mounted Thieves' Guild, we have no knowledge of national borders, political organizations, government structures or any of the other things that help you understand the societal structures where the story takes place. Who gave Gina the authority to evaluate potential Dragon Riders? Is it a post or occupation? Who authorized and issued the wanted poster? Is the Thieves Guild and openly recognized organization everywhere, or just in the forest? What is the structure of the society our MC lives in? I think I would enjoy the story more with a few of these borders and authorities delineated, but I guess we'll just have to wait and see what they are as the characters reveal them.
I'm finding the story interesting. The art is not the best I've seen, but it is better than anything I could do, and more than adequate to convey the plot. The one thing that I'm finding moderately confusing, however, is the fact that we don't learn anything that doesn't come out of a character's mouth. That means, outside of the dragon mounted Thieves' Guild, we have no knowledge of national borders, political organizations, government structures or any of the other things that help you understand the societal structures where the story takes place. Who gave Gina the authority to evaluate potential Dragon Riders? Is it a post or occupation? Who authorized and issued the wanted poster? Is the Thieves Guild and openly recognized organization everywhere, or just in the forest? What is the structure of the society our MC lives in? I think I would enjoy the story more with a few of these borders and authorities delineated, but I guess we'll just have to wait and see what they are as the characters reveal them.