Responses

But the author could’ve done a better job moving into this part of the plot as this feels a bit sudden. As tropey as “I deserve an explanation!” “Okay 704, calm down let me tell you a story” or *704 gets a sudden headache and then falls unconscious and the memory starts* or some sort of flashback scene.
That one reader that keeps on saying "only wants to read two guys fucking" etc, yikes! From the beginning it's so obvious that this story is not about fucking lol. It's already established that this story has a great and vast plot. Perhaps they just missed that 1st couple and confused where the story will last and go back to the present time.