it's okay...

qu33n_chicken September 9, 2023 7:56 am

umm... this was kinda bad. The seme's unnecessary comments about the uke's body and weight, the uke's naivety or should i just say stupidity, the translations which; to me, were barely readable or maybe it was just the dialogue idk, plus the unsatisfactory ending. To me this just wasn't....good. the only good thing I can say about this was the sex scenes but even that felt like it wasn't long enough idk how to explain it lol.σ( ̄∇ ̄;)

Responses
    Mikeals pocket pushay February 1, 2024 11:53 pm

    "The only good things were the sex scenes" stfu pls

    jyugos_nō1stan February 2, 2024 12:23 am
    "The only good things were the sex scenes" stfu pls Mikeals pocket pushay

    getting pressing at me for what?? for an opinion?!. And why did you only leave a reply on my comment when other people also made comments about how the story wasn't that good too??
    Nobody should get that mad when someone says the only good thing about a shitty smut story is the sex scenes.
    stfu and go to bed pls. you need help, shnookums( ・3・)

    Francess February 17, 2024 2:40 pm
    "The only good things were the sex scenes" stfu pls Mikeals pocket pushay

    They’re right. The only good things WERE the sex scenes

    Urmtfkingbbmrckrtmum February 17, 2024 4:09 pm
    They’re right. The only good things WERE the sex scenes Francess

    No u just nasty and can’t appreciate other styles of plot

    Ka-chan✨ April 26, 2024 5:08 am
    No u just nasty and can’t appreciate other styles of plot Urmtfkingbbmrckrtmum

    Dude, plot where? tell me one other thing you’ve understood from this story