What is this boo-boo ass story… main character suddenly “becomes good” without any i...

Edward September 8, 2023 2:05 pm

What is this boo-boo ass story… main character suddenly “becomes good” without any inclinations of his past life somehow, and suffers very little blowback… everyone just suddenly accepts that he’s good now? The romance feels very stiff and not realistic too, especially in the beginning. I kind of wish it was deeper than it is. No hate if you like it but I thought it would be better.

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    hiit.read September 8, 2023 2:47 pm

    Omg I love this comment. I just can’t forget the bad stuff he did before he was given a second chance and the story could’ve been told in like 30 chapters or less. It wasn’t as intense as I thought it would be.

    raccoon September 9, 2023 1:10 pm

    hahaha im glad someone felt the same way. its so excruciating to finish this story.

    September 9, 2023 2:41 pm

    The manhwa feels rush but the novel pretty detail, and story like this (reincarnation) supposed not to be taken as realistic in the first place, it is fiction for a reason

    Tima September 9, 2023 9:23 pm

    I feel exactly the same way

    Historia Zen September 11, 2023 3:47 am
    The manhwa feels rush but the novel pretty detail, and story like this (reincarnation) supposed not to be taken as realistic in the first place, it is fiction for a reason

    Just because its a story doesnt mean you don't accept it not having any timgempf realism. I cant bring myself to feel them because their emotions are all over the place, they're stiff, they have no chemistry and their reactions makes no sense. Being able to relate to a story is a big deal, u can't excuse a poor ass writing with "its just fiction, it shouldn't be taken realistically"

    Even the most fantasty story that ever exists have realistic aspect to it

    Historia Zen September 11, 2023 3:47 am
    Just because its a story doesnt mean you don't accept it not having any timgempf realism. I cant bring myself to feel them because their emotions are all over the place, they're stiff, they have no chemistry an... Historia Zen

    Any tinge of*

    September 11, 2023 6:23 am
    Just because its a story doesnt mean you don't accept it not having any timgempf realism. I cant bring myself to feel them because their emotions are all over the place, they're stiff, they have no chemistry an... Historia Zen

    Idk what you mean but you're the only doesn't make sense here, are you sure that you even bother reading the whole manhwa to say it? If you're finding realism story, you shouldn't even read this in the first place. ML literally one of green flag ML out there, are you not used to that? XD The manhwa didn't fully executed the novel but it is alright, they still shown the important part. Fantasy and realistic are not same, keep it on your small brain of your

    Historia Zen September 11, 2023 6:38 am
    Idk what you mean but you're the only doesn't make sense here, are you sure that you even bother reading the whole manhwa to say it? If you're finding realism story, you shouldn't even read this in the first pl...

    Girl, you're the one who isn't able to grasp what im trying to day with that pebble brain of yours. Im not saying they're the same, I'm saying that every stories have a touch of being realistic to it. In a fantasy genre, sure setting is very magical, but that's all, emotions are still real and reactions are real, that's what I'm trying to imply. And this story?? It doesn't have that, its all over the place, its shallow and their reactions to everything feels superficial, if you still don't get that then idk anymore.


    Also, have I ever said that i dont agree in ml being green?? All i said was THEY DON'T HAVE CHEMISTRY. What makes you think that just because ml is a green flag automatically makes him completely suitable for another character? He's sloppily written and has no depth. Just because a character is green flag means They're executed good. You're reading a story, not looking for irl partner. It matters if the character has depth and not just some oh so perfect man who always knows what to say and do for mc. Give this man some flaws and other notable personality lmao

    Historia Zen September 11, 2023 6:40 am
    Girl, you're the one who isn't able to grasp what im trying to day with that pebble brain of yours. Im not saying they're the same, I'm saying that every stories have a touch of being realistic to it. In a fant... Historia Zen

    Say*

    Doesn't mean their character execution is good**

    ciel September 11, 2023 11:25 am

    Don’t know why ur getting downvoted, you’re right.

    Daemon September 11, 2023 12:52 pm
    The manhwa feels rush but the novel pretty detail, and story like this (reincarnation) supposed not to be taken as realistic in the first place, it is fiction for a reason

    Fantasty is not the same thing as fiction, first of all. Fiction is prose that describes imaginary events and people while being a 1=1 of our world most of the same. Fantasy varies but dabbling in the fantastical and supernatural etc etc but it still has an element of realism because if it didn't you wouldn't be able to recognise it and thus comprehend it. I don't think you know what you're talking about

    Daemon September 11, 2023 12:54 pm

    You're so right. It had so much potential but it turned out to be pretty trash. Both the MC and ML have the personality of wet cardboard. I have never forgotten a story so quickly as this one.

    aisha September 11, 2023 10:25 pm
    Just because its a story doesnt mean you don't accept it not having any timgempf realism. I cant bring myself to feel them because their emotions are all over the place, they're stiff, they have no chemistry an... Historia Zen

    I so agree with you