Lame

shavambacu September 2, 2023 5:36 am

I understand authors trying to circle back and making the asshole seme rectify his bad choices and change as a person, but these last few chapters are just so badly written???
I thought BJ Alex’s turnaround was rushed but here the author is just straight up forcing it because Yahwi keeps popping up and clinging to Jooin every other panel and Jooin acts like he didn’t grow tf up and reject this guy’s manipulative tactics only a few chapters ago.
The writing is getting super lazy fr

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    Lady tikki September 3, 2023 2:05 am

    Frrr bro like why did the author feel the need to make them meet 5 minutes after just seeing each other off?? LIKE WHAT ELSE IS NEEDED TO HE SAID BETWEEN THEM THAT WASN'T SAID AT YAHWIS APARTMENT OR ON THE RIDE?!? My ass even though he was going to meet Cain. And now the author adds the "childhood friends" trope to the story in hopes of making it seem somewhat romantic UGH