The Mc has no character development, no script, no personality at all. A story like this i...

MrNobody September 1, 2023 9:10 am

The Mc has no character development, no script, no personality at all. A story like this is just FLAT, based on smut and the hot seme that can't feel emotions because he had family trauma. So damn cliché!

Responses
    HELPMELMAO September 1, 2023 11:34 am

    the mc has been through shit when he was younger which reflects how he is today, if you dont like it gtfo then gosh

    MrNobody September 1, 2023 11:42 am
    the mc has been through shit when he was younger which reflects how he is today, if you dont like it gtfo then gosh HELPMELMAO

    Such a mature comment you left. The Mc is written so bad, instead of saying "well he had trauma so he'll be like that for the rest of his life" you should think how since the first chapter there is no character development In a bad or good way. Victimizing everything, even yourself is the wrong way of thinking.

    HELPMELMAO September 1, 2023 11:49 am
    Such a mature comment you left. The Mc is written so bad, instead of saying "well he had trauma so he'll be like that for the rest of his life" you should think how since the first chapter there is no character... MrNobody

    thanks for the compliment babes

    MrNobody September 1, 2023 2:25 pm
    thanks for the compliment babes HELPMELMAO

    Of course that's the only thing you can say

    HELPMELMAO September 1, 2023 3:14 pm
    Of course that's the only thing you can say MrNobody

    no i wasnt bothered reading allat shit u said

    Sam September 1, 2023 5:01 pm
    no i wasnt bothered reading allat shit u said HELPMELMAO

    Man you really need some help

    HELPMELMAO September 1, 2023 6:48 pm
    Man you really need some help Sam

    its all in the name sugar

    MrNobody September 1, 2023 11:18 pm
    its all in the name sugar HELPMELMAO

    Get off the internet, you clearly have lost touch with reality.

    HELPMELMAO September 1, 2023 11:57 pm
    Get off the internet, you clearly have lost touch with reality. MrNobody

    is it that obvious shugs??