i understand broadstrokes of the plot but the webtoon has troubles in pacing cause why theyre doing something and then flashes back into idk how many centuries back but theres just no distinction. the demon/champion queen thing is also in a mess storytelling wise, its just so unclear bc the panels are disorganised, the temporal markings are very blurred and all and its such a shame bc MC is very likeable and the story is quite serious and packed
i understand broadstrokes of the plot but the webtoon has troubles in pacing cause why theyre doing something and then flashes back into idk how many centuries back but theres just no distinction. the demon/champion queen thing is also in a mess storytelling wise, its just so unclear bc the panels are disorganised, the temporal markings are very blurred and all and its such a shame bc MC is very likeable and the story is quite serious and packed