Girl you did so well it’s okay to cry! Good job you did it you survived (really pushed t...

duckydud August 30, 2023 12:35 pm

Girl you did so well it’s okay to cry! Good job you did it you survived (really pushed the deadline with that 24 hour timeline).

She got her revenge, but what happened to half the planning? She never got to use the evidence of the two of them sleeping or some of the other stuff she planned. Didn’t get a chance to humiliate and attack them further for being hypocrite cheaters.

I personally didn’t want the revenge moment to be dragged out like the whole 24 hours of it planning, but that was very rushed. The pacing of the story has either been pretty slow or too fast.

The only argument I could give to the reason that pacing was really fast was because the shitty “prince” and “main heroine” are actually dumb because they pulled up with flimsy evidence. Also the “heroine” only follow the story dialogue. She can’t think for herself and know how to use her brain to deal with the situation. That’s why she never talked back or refuted arguments our girl made because they weren’t part of the “script”. Her reaction to the change in the situation was to scream in denial and in turn making her situation worse (going to a monastery).

Hopefully in the next couple chapters we see more of the evidence and plans she made put to use. If the author is gonna drag out part of the story, I hope it’s the parts they show of the idiot couple and other terrible male characters suffering.

Also interested to know who the girl that the “main heroine” was friends with. I would love to see her reaction to her friend going to the monastery. It’s likely she’s the girl who kept writing the mysterious letters to the second prince and queen about the future events.

They better put chapters of our girl healing from the pain the shitty couple inflicted and her becoming a badass QUEEN

(side note: I know he’s not a main character of her revenge, but props to the third prince for taking that punch for our girl. He better take care of and treat our girl like the goddess she is)

Responses
    AXCEL August 30, 2023 1:30 pm

    Haha! I agree!
    I was also wondering what happened to the culmination of all her planning if she was just gonna butcher them w/sound logic!

    But, then I remembered that the absence of the other capture targets and the support of the ladies were part of her plans (so the ex-CP won't have support). However, you made a point that the evidence of cheating may not have been used yet....?

    duckydud August 30, 2023 1:37 pm
    Haha! I agree! I was also wondering what happened to the culmination of all her planning if she was just gonna butcher them w/sound logic!But, then I remembered that the absence of the other capture targets and... AXCEL

    Yeah the build up of chapter updates was so long I forgot. A big part of the success was the other capture targets not being present to back up the claims the couple made. But even then I thought the cheating evidence would be the strongest impacting evidence for why she could argue against the shitty prince’s logic of calling her selfish.

    Maybe they will publish an article of all his cheating later on for the public to know. But it would have been more satisfying and impactful to me if they presented this evidence in public in from of an audience. After all the shitty couple were gonna do that to her, so she could have done that to them.

    AXCEL August 30, 2023 2:51 pm
    Yeah the build up of chapter updates was so long I forgot. A big part of the success was the other capture targets not being present to back up the claims the couple made. But even then I thought the cheating e... duckydud

    Riight? It ended up feeling a wee bit anti climatic hahaha