More spoilers

Ken~chin August 19, 2023 9:56 am

Did my comment get deleted? Anyway posting this again. Also fixed a few things in this one.

It's about killian this time I know there are a lot of people who still hate him and some who still like him cuz they know he's under the og author's mind control.

So this was another thing that really really annoyed me in the novel about killian. The og author's control over killian was starting to diminish after Edith started breaking the conditions set by og author. He was starting to fall for edith (can't remember if it was after Edith had broken the 2nd condition, I'm guessing she had), he was kind of starting to piece things together about how somebody was intentionally framing Edith and maybe Edith wasn't lying (the case of edith poisoning herself to frame rize, the case of Edith poisoning rize etc) and even thought for a second it could be rize who could be framing. So now he was tryna make Edith like him more cuz dude was starting to feel the badumps for edith. He'd act all lovey dovey with edith and they both really looked like a cute couple. And yet he didn't say anything or scold rize when rize showed up to his room in the middle of the night in her damn night gown. I'm talking from the perspective of people from those times, an unmarried woman entering the room of a married man in her night gown in the middle of the night is kinda weird. Even Anna was worried about this and told Edith about this. Edith didn't suspect anything. And the actual reason rize did this was to seduce killian cuz she could feel killian was becoming more distant from her and wanted to have some control over him again. Too bad killian liked voluptuous women like edith .
Let's move forward then. So rize entered killian's room and started acting like she cared about Edith and giving tips to killian on how to improve his relationship with edith. Like bitch couldn't wait until the next day, had to tell the tips in the middle of the night. Killian thanked her and then KISSED HER ON THE FOREHEAD AS A GOODNIGHT KISS. like in those times, that's something to gossip about. And also why TF would you kiss the girl you have a crush on on the forehead when you're literally trying to court edith. And killian kissed rize on the forehead multiple times in the novel.
So moving on, edith was going out with Anna to eat cakes and the same day killian had plans to go shopping with rize. Like just the 2 of them alone all day shopping and shit. Edith and killian both net outside the mansion when edith was boarding her carriage, and killian thought Edith looked a bit lonely. Anyway, killian went with rize to some famous street and rize decided to hold killian's arm (like how a woman clasps a man's arm ), rize had never done this before so killian was kinda confused and also it wasn't a good thing for their reputation to hang around with rize's arm around him BUT killian just let her be ( he was also kinda suspicious of rize at this point, he was suspecting her of framing Edith but still didn't shake off her arm). Made me hella mad. Call be narrow minded but I don't think any decent married man FROM THAT TIME would let a woman act so clingy with him in public especially if the whole continent knew he had a crush on that woman.
rant over. Bye

Responses
    tockakiss August 19, 2023 11:26 am

    nah you right why he let rize throw herself at him and not call her out????? ugh ml is so naiveeeee(╯°Д °)╯╧╧

    Moonlight9 August 19, 2023 11:44 am

    Man I got so annoyed reading this. I like Killian but he can be a complete ass. I hate men that don't put a stop. to someone who's clearly coming on to them when they say they're trying to make it work with someone else.

    Bb penguin August 19, 2023 1:21 pm

    Hi as far as I recall the things u said is correct but at that point I don’t recall kilian suspecting rize, he started suspecting her after the yatch incident where Edith almost died

    Ken~chin August 19, 2023 1:29 pm
    Hi as far as I recall the things u said is correct but at that point I don’t recall kilian suspecting rize, he started suspecting her after the yatch incident where Edith almost died Bb penguin

    Yeah, I have forgotten a few things. It was after the yatch incident but even before he once or twice had a fleeting thought and then he was like nahhhh it can't be rize. Thanks for reminding me thoヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

    Ken~chin August 19, 2023 1:30 pm
    nah you right why he let rize throw herself at him and not call her out????? ugh ml is so naiveeeee(╯°Д °)╯╧╧ tockakiss

    Ikr. It left such a sour taste in my mouth. And dude had the audacity to get jealous when linon saw Edith's crying face.

    Ken~chin August 19, 2023 1:34 pm
    Man I got so annoyed reading this. I like Killian but he can be a complete ass. I hate men that don't put a stop. to someone who's clearly coming on to them when they say they're trying to make it work with som... Moonlight9

    I liked linon but too bad he wasn't the male lead.