No plot

Arony August 19, 2023 8:40 am

This story isn't going anywhere. It's just rape after rape no plot progression. What's the point of this?

Responses
    Yaoiforlife August 19, 2023 9:31 am

    Rape is the plot and plot is the rape

    Arony August 19, 2023 9:38 am
    Rape is the plot and plot is the rape Yaoiforlife

    It seems so.

    HELPMELMAO August 19, 2023 10:02 pm

    his revenge is next chapter

    Arony August 20, 2023 7:38 am
    his revenge is next chapter HELPMELMAO

    He takes revenge every other chapter or is about to and it doesn't progress the plot whatsoever.

    toilet terrorist August 22, 2023 8:54 pm

    Are your eye sockets filled with tissue? The plot is Geom's suffering, love and revenge.

    Arony August 23, 2023 5:19 am
    Are your eye sockets filled with tissue? The plot is Geom's suffering, love and revenge. toilet terrorist

    Yet none of them drive the plot further. They only go around in circles. Plus I see no revenge lol.

    toilet terrorist August 23, 2023 10:57 am
    Yet none of them drive the plot further. They only go around in circles. Plus I see no revenge lol. Arony

    its starting now lol

    Arony August 24, 2023 8:19 am
    its starting now lol toilet terrorist

    It starts every 10 chapters and leads to nothing. And plot shouldn't start so late in the story. It should start from get go and keep readers engaged.