Art is good,but…

Devicre August 18, 2023 9:25 pm

Artist excels at drawing,but their story telling is choppy. They need an author to help them write and plan the vision of their story better. It’s going to fast and there’s no connection to the reader as to why they should even care about these characters breaking up. The break up and reasoning all happens in 2 chapters of barely knowing anything.
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Responses
    Seph August 22, 2023 4:43 pm

    Ummm although I somewhat agree with you on certain points, I would like to point out that the author and artist are two different people. The author is Neko and the artist is called PurpleCotton