Definitely agree. Fox isn't all that innocent, just naive, but we're not given the whole story between him and the grandfather that might explain why it had to be done like that. We're also completely clueless as to why the seme supposedly liked the fox, yet he was so angry and violent when the option of sleeping with him came up. He was a right fucking dick to the fox that night and we don't understand why. Shouldn't he have been happy? If he wanted to "trap" the fox he could have done it then. We don't have ANYONE'S motives. Sadly when I realized this was "wolf behind bars" author the plot holes made more sense. She tries her hand at mystery and suspense ripe with dubcon and she's not quite good at it yet.
Yes exactly! Wolf behind bars had many plot holes but at least the story between the two protagonists honestly was not that bad
The plot doesn’t make sense. They both like each other but you can’t tell why four years go by. They see each other again, they still like each other, but you don’t understand why they have this awkward and almost constrictive relationship. The story is rushed and I don’t know where it’s going. The seme says that it does so because it does not want him to escape...but the fox has always been there, he never wanted to escape! Everyone hates the seme for its character but we want to talk about the uke that with the trap gets pregnant and says nothing for four years? Just because he has that innocent face doesn’t mean he is.
Too bad because the idea is nice, but it was developed badly.