There's a lot missing

Celestia August 15, 2023 1:49 am

Honestly I feel like there's a lot of plot holes, not in the main plot but the sub plots and other characters like what about the other MLs? We legit seen that mage what? Once? MAYBE twice? And same with the other dude. And when she dies will he become a god with her since they are soul bound he'd just come to that realm with her and become a god as well right? And what happened to that slave that Killian took away that was "untamable" and we just never see him again?? (Unless I missed it lmk) I knew it felt too short ending at 72 chapters and I'm left feeling a little disappointed about not having an epilogue that may have given answers about the other characters I liked or that we barely got to see. AND WHERE IS THE WHITE HAIR PUPPY LIKE KID AT?? Ik he's at the kingdom but I was hoping to see him make some progress with his education. But none the less I enjoyed it and the art is lovely! It also had some nice messages in it regarding the original FL as well.

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    Leon Reiner Luka s. Zess August 26, 2023 3:41 am

    Yea I assume there are so many plot holes because this was meant to be a short story, so I'm not surprised they skimmed over a lot. I wanna know what happened to the Ex-OG Knight ML he was actually the most decent person out of the 4 Ex-original MLs as for the wizard ML ...havnt seen enough to judge him really but he seemed like the cowardly simp type lol ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭